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Jazz funk yay!

Wow, I've heard many versions of Oleo, but this is something quite refreshing. Never would've thought of funking the song up like that, The theme sounds great slowed down and grooving like this :)

sorohanro responds:

Thanx for review.
I guess I got tired of listening and playing it in swing over and over again ...
There is another version by SSM-NW much crazier than mine and a live recording by "Republik" ... check those in the Jazz section, you'll not be sorry ;)

Very nice :)

You have a good sense of melody and a good understanding of harmony in a static key (staying in one key). My gripe with this is the way the themes just keep stacking on top of each other and don't seem to go anywhere and while the lines do work well together they don't flow all that naturally. Also you should try and add some contrary motion and dynamics as well as harmonic variety. This is just my opinion and ofc you should do as you feel right and you do compose great themes and melodies, it's just the underlying structures that make them a bit dull sounding to my ears. Keep making tunes and listening to great composers, you've got a good thing going here and if you are only 16 as your profile says, you're very well on your way!

FairSquare responds:

First of all: thanks! Reviews like this are so helpful.
And i totally agree with you, but it's pretty hard to make dynamic songs. My songs have gotten more dynamic, but i'm still not where i want to be.
I really appreciate your review!

MH16

Excellent

I'm glad SC Guitar Maniac Dx 2 was made so I got to hear your music, it is awesome. Pretty standard but extremely beautiful chord progression with the piano and the nylon string guitar. Nice all around, I can't think of anything bad to say except it's short.

Evil-Dog responds:

a bit short eh? My inspiration don't last very long sadly! I can never compose 5-7 minutes pieces

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